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Dear x ,
Hi , how are you ? I hope you are in the pink. I'm writing this email to invite you go to Aeon Shopping Centre to celebrate Lunar New Year.
First and foremost , the Lunar New Year Day at Aeon Shopping Centre has acrobatic lion dance at 11 a.m . Moreover , the Bian Lian performance will be start at 3 p.m . Futhermore , there also has flower drum performance will be start from 5:00 p.m until
7 p.m . Lastly , the dragon dance will be start at 8 p.m .
I'm glad to writing email for you. If you decide to go there , please tell me with an email. See you soon.
From ,
y
谢谢～
