Pls help me to check my ans, thanks! urgent need

Question

this is the article.

And this is my ans. Is there any problem? 

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Sorry, my handwriting is a bit ugly. Please excuse me, tq.

Comments

咦，public toilet 那边好像有点怪怪的？你读读看看

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What if it is went to the public toilet?  Is it reasonable?

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I have opened up, u can write ur ans, thank u

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我觉得I've been for 22 years 比较恰当

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Oh ok thank you. U can write ur answer. I will adopt you.
I don’t know if the word “adopt” is suitable, please forgive my bad English. (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ)

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your的handwritting is好过me

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你是特地这么写的吗？ :P

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Cuz my mum say my handwriting is not that good.

Answer 1

Sorry,I delete my answer because some problems about me.

Comments

哇，为什么你被扣那么多分