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Hmm, 我不知道要写多少字....?
可以这样写吗....?

Everyone has their favourite fruit, i like apples.
.....look (like?) glossy and sweet , 还有什么词语可以形容它的品味.....?
i first tried the apple at 6 years old..(?
i recommend it because it can helps us prevent illnes.
i like it because it is very (?) delicious ....?

结果写到这样很少,I have no idea ahhh 
怎样写多一点啊..?
能用ai 做suggestion (?)

希望大家可以给我答复! 谢谢!

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1. taste- refreshing, juicy, crunchy

2. 1st time trying- describe why u eat it, what ur feelings were, and the scenario when eating it (e.g. asked by mom to try it, excited)

3. reason of recommendation- can use the quote "an apple a day keeps the doctor away" and describe what kind of diseases it can prevent (e.g. constipation)

4. reason u like it- describe how it reminds u of family, can add more reasons (two or more)

5. add conclusion- connect back to the title (e.g. all in all, I like apples bc it reminds me of family, and it can prevent diseases.)
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My favourite fruit is AN apple. APPLES look glassy and sweet. I remember THE FIRST TIME I TRIED it WHEN I was SIX years old. I WOULD RECOMMEND it because it can help us TO prevent DISEASES. I like it because it reminds me of family.
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