请问有任何语病吗？谢谢你
语病是应该没有barrrrrrr
只是我觉得你的那个I want to choose this job is because I like to record my day可以换掉
因为我觉得如果你写日记也是可以record 你的 day了，不一定要当作者才可以记录你的生活（omg我觉得我讲到有点难听）
ermm我觉得你可以改成你对写作很感兴趣啊或者你的文笔比较好那种blablablabla(●'◡'●)
I want to choose this job is because I like to record my day
你可以改成
→As I become an author，my wildest fantasies can come to life
→The reason I want to choose this job is because.....
→It is because I like to record my daily activities (如果你要你的内容还在的话）
